diff --git a/src/content/rambles/config-snippets.md b/src/content/rambles/config-snippets.md
index 0851f86..b741c14 100644
--- a/src/content/rambles/config-snippets.md
+++ b/src/content/rambles/config-snippets.md
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ title: "Config Snippets"
 date: "2024-04-09T18:38:46+02:00"
 author: "$HUMANOID"
 tags: ["xmonad", "haskell", "nix"]
-description: "I have quite a few things in my config are worth highlighting."
+description: "A few things in my config worth highlighting."
 toc: true
 ---
 
diff --git a/src/content/rambles/deadlink.md b/src/content/rambles/deadlink.md
index 1d4c92e..a9efd09 100644
--- a/src/content/rambles/deadlink.md
+++ b/src/content/rambles/deadlink.md
@@ -21,11 +21,11 @@ in my path, largely without a care in the world. Or rather, that's how it feels.
 
 Where Deadlink succeeds- and Doom Etenral fails is the implementation of
 weakspots. In Eternal, if you want to shoot a weakspot, you don't have much of a
-choice but to switch to the machinegun or not-railgun; those being the only
-precision weapons. In Deadlink, if you manage to shoot some poor dude's head
-with a rocket launcher, the game will still give you the weakspot damage --
-despite normal enemies being able to withstand about a quarter of a rocket to
-the feet at most.
+choice but to switch to the machinegun or not-railgunb (I forget its actual
+name); those being the only precision weapons. In Deadlink, if you manage to
+shoot some poor dude's head with a rocket launcher, the game will still give you
+the weakspot damage -- despite normal enemies being able to withstand about a
+quarter of a rocket to the feet at most.
 
 Another big mistake that Eternal makes is the tutorialising every restrictive
 mechanic that it introduces, while Deadlink lets the player largely figure out