From fa3144447ecce3e8c995151c3e77c00c6bf29c23 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Marty Sluijtman Date: Fri, 29 Mar 2024 20:10:15 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] typo --- antimattercloud/story-snippets/duel.gmi | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/antimattercloud/story-snippets/duel.gmi b/antimattercloud/story-snippets/duel.gmi index fc1b55b..86290a2 100644 --- a/antimattercloud/story-snippets/duel.gmi +++ b/antimattercloud/story-snippets/duel.gmi @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # Duel -And then it all came crashing down. Their whole life. Wren had spent an unimaginable amount of time working their dream, only to have it snatched away at the last moment. Their quickened perception forced them to bear witness to the bullet exiting his rapidly-collapsing skull. After what felt like an eternity, what was left of his head sank forward as blood and brain matter began to pour out through the sides. Instinct kicked in as they saw the red dot race to their head next. With one quick motion, they kicked over the solid metal table next to them while diving behind it. A loud clang followed as the bullet dug into the table, only to ricochet into the ceiling. The table nearly fell on its legs again, only be held upright by Wren. +And then it all came crashing down. Their whole life. Wren had spent an unimaginable amount of time working their dream, only to have it snatched away at the last moment. Quickened perception forced them to bear witness to the bullet exiting his rapidly-collapsing skull. After what felt like an eternity, what was left of his head sank forward as blood and brain matter began to pour out through the sides. Instinct kicked in as they saw the red dot race to their head next. With one quick motion, they kicked over the solid metal table next to them while diving behind it. A loud clang followed as the bullet dug into the table, only to ricochet into the ceiling. The table nearly fell on its legs again, only be held upright by Wren. "Why!" @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ A speed loader emerged from a pocket. "You bastard! We were so close!" -A high caliber revolver emerged from a concealed holster. Wren poked their head out from the side of the table, only to have it be immediately answered by a muzzle flash from the building next to them. With an artificial jolt of adrenaline, they managed to pull their head back in just in time. The bullet hit the wooden floor, causing the panel to explode. Splinters shot out in all directions, some embedding themselves into the side of Wren's face, who was too high on adrenaline to feel any pain. +A high caliber revolver emerged from a concealed holster. Wren poked their head out from the side of the table, only to have it be immediately answered by a muzzle flash from the building next to them. With an artificial jolt of adrenaline, they managed to pull their head back just in time. The bullet hit the wooden floor, causing the panel to explode. Splinters shot out in all directions, some embedding themselves into the side of Wren's face, who was too high on adrenaline to feel any pain. "At least I know where you are..."